Quick Feedback on Feb Specials Flyer

[legacypc46]

Hi guys. Can I get a quick second pair of eyes (or more) on this? I put it together really fast (DH is gripping about other things that need to be done. Gotta love him, but.... )
Thanks
leggy

 

[K_Jurich]

Looks Great to me!

 

[ChefMoore]

Great job! I didn't see any mistakes!

 

[legacypc46]

thanks! (as always, feel free to copy)

 

[legacypc46]

My first one took too much ink. Here's a modified version.

 

[ChefBeckyD]

Leggy - I always love your monthly specials flyer!

I downloaded the revised one - there are 2 small mistakes that I see.

The first is a grammatical error (Sorry - My eye just goes there) It should be "Here are a couple examples" - using Here's indicates singular, but a couple examples is plural.....

And the o is missing in the word choice in the blurb about the sprinkles.

Okay - that's it from me...don't mean to be nit-picky, because I do love your flyer!

 

[legacypc46]

Thanks! Here is the corrected version and my host letter and outside order form as well. (Outside order form is PA specific.)

I can't believe I am only now getting around to making February flyers! We are in the middle of two long distance moves within two months.(I am only doing one show in January...just had to get that tablecloth! ) Our households good arrive from Germany tomorrow and Tuesday we drive a U-Haul from Florida to Pennsylvannia. Geez, am I grateful to have some Feb shows finally scheduled!

By the way, this site has been an absolute life-line these past couple weeks. I moved after a rockin' year (level 4, baby!) but had to put the business on back priority this month. Checking into Chef Success every day has kept me 'in the game.'
leggy