Inviting Neighbors to My 1st Two Shows - Need Feedback!

[laylaleigh]

I posted a couple days ago about inviting my neighbors to two shows in one week. I am sending a flyer instead of two seperate invitations. Anyways, I am not creative at all!! My husband put this flyer together for me. The document is in Microsoft Publisher. I am not sure if I love it. Feedback please!!
Thanks! also these are my 1st two shows.

 

[tlennhoff]

Its ok. I love the idea and the way its organized. The colors are a little... well not me but I really don't have any suggestions/thoughts. He did a great job and seems quite creative.

 

[BethCooks4U]

The problem with Publisher is that the person opening it has to have the same version that it was saved in. Most of us won't be able to see what you have here.

 

[jenniferp417]

Here it is in PDF form so everyone can take a look!

 

[Jules711]

It is simple and well laid out. I wouldn't use yellow background though. Evidently, that's the hardest color on our eyes. I wouldn't use bold so much either. Seems to make it a little harder to read in that font? Being invited to two shows in the same week! Wow...choices, choices! I hope they go well for you.

 

[BethCooks4U]

This really looks great!! Well done!:balloon:

 

[laylaleigh]

Thanks for the tips. Jennifer-thanks for switching it to a PDF. Apparently my hubby made some changes at work and is printing them for me. I'll see what I get when he gets home.

 

[chefjeanine]

This is a really attractive flyer. Great job!

Personal preference? "There is no time better” doesn’t read easily for me. I find that "There is no better time" flows for me.

I would include your phone number with your name at the bottom. They might not want to attend any of these events but they may want to contact you.