Help the Ranch and Get SAT Points: Host a Pampered Chef Party Fundraiser!

[grainsmommy]

Can you look this over and tell me if it looks okay/what would make it better? I'm proposing this idea to the ranch where my daughter takes riding lessons. The owner said she'd like to have a PC party, but when I paid her for my DD lessons she said, "thank you so much, you just paid for our senior horses feed. I didn't know what I was going to do." I thought it'd be better to host a fundraiser for her and if I close it in November I won't mind donating all of my commission because I'll get pts for SAT.

TIA!!

 

[cathyskitchen]

The only pointers I have is to use ONE font (Arial is the preferred business font), as it can be hard to read funky fonts (even though they can be fun!); and be sure to put the registered trademark (R) in a circle after the words "The Pampered Chef" throughout the document. There's also a better logo that you can download from Consultant's Corner that will look much better than the tiny one that's on there now.

Here's where you can find the logos: https://www.pamperedchef.com/repsonly/public_comm/recipe_success_ad_guidelines.html

 

[grainsmommy]

Thank you! Here is the new copy. I kept HHH title in the different font because it's her logo. Is it better?

 

[cathyskitchen]

It looks great!

 

[pcchefjane]

Looks great! Hope you raise tons of money!!

 

[linojackie]

I love the idea! I am going to be doing some fundraiser booths and I might be able to use the raffle idea! thanks

 

[grainsmommy]

The raffle is not as generous as some I've seen, but I figured I wanted the money to go toward the ranch and not the prizes. For 2-$50 prizes it will only cost me $80, so the ranch gets $170 donation to fill the card.

I am undecided on the FPV, because I want to entice people, but at the same time I want to recoup SOMETHING for my efforts. I'm a new consultant, so I think I'll keep the FPV for myself to build my inventory.