Ready to Send: Check My Wording & Generate $$$!

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Discussion Overview

The thread centers around participants sharing their thoughts on wording for a customer outreach message related to upcoming promotions and bookings. Several users provide feedback on the content and structure of the message, while others express their personal experiences with similar outreach efforts.

Discussion Character

  • Opinion-based
  • Anecdotal

Main Points Raised

  • One participant, identifying as a consultant, shares that they made changes to their message to include personal experiences from a recent trip, but their spouse thinks it may be too much information.
  • Another participant mentions the promotional offer for February, detailing the discounts available and their personal approach to incentivizing bookings.
  • Several users express the need for clarity and conciseness in the messaging, with one participant suggesting it should be limited to one page.
  • One participant notes a discrepancy in the dates mentioned in the message and offers a correction.
  • Another participant expresses enthusiasm for the concept and indicates they might try a similar approach.
  • One participant mentions feeling overwhelmed by the information in the flyers and suggests simplifying the content.

Areas of Agreement / Disagreement

Views differ on the amount of personal information to include in the outreach message, with some participants supporting a more personal touch while others suggest keeping it focused on the promotion. No clear consensus emerges on the best approach to the wording.

Contextual Notes

Participants share their experiences and thoughts in the context of preparing promotional messages for customer outreach, reflecting on past successes and current challenges.

Who May Find This Useful

Consultants looking for feedback on customer communication strategies and those interested in sharing experiences related to promotional messaging may find this discussion relevant.

pamperedalf
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Okay I am getting ready to send this out to my customers, but want to check wording before I do. I made changes on 2 to include about my trip, my dh thinks it's too much!

I also included wording from the first one I did last year. It generated a $1300 show last feb. Thanks to whoever posted this the first time. TIA for all your help!
 

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If it's for February, it's 60% off any one item in the catalog. If you are able to "book" it off another show, you'd have a total of 4 to give. So...4 60% off, 4 1/2 off and I personally give 2 $100 free since $215 is a lot. I also give $25 for every extra $100 collected since it guarantees a payoff for doing more work. Also, why 25% vs 30%?? or do you not put it on the host order?

As for the rest, I'm not awake enough to give good feedback. Good luck! I really need to do this too! But I want to end it before double points! I have to get on the phone. No time to mail and follow up!
 
Jules711 said:
If it's for February, it's 60% off any one item in the catalog. If you are able to "book" it off another show, you'd have a total of 4 to give. So...4 60% off, 4 1/2 off and I personally give 2 $100 free since $215 is a lot. I also give $25 for every extra $100 collected since it guarantees a payoff for doing more work. Also, why 25% vs 30%?? or do you not put it on the host order?

As for the rest, I'm not awake enough to give good feedback. Good luck! I really need to do this too! But I want to end it before double points! I have to get on the phone. No time to mail and follow up!
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2 items at 60% off. I know, you said you're tired.
 
I was saying if you "booked" it off another show, you'd have 2 as host and 2 as past host.
 
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I hadn't change that wording yet, sorry I wasn't more specific. I meant the wording at the beginning. Thanks again!I have been sick the past two days so, all is fuzzy.
 
I like the concept Amanda! I am going to read it thoroughly and see if this is what I would do too.
 
Amanda, I just noticed that the day of the week is off a day from the date. Hope you haven't mailed them out yet. Other than that looks good to me!
 
This is a great idea! I think I am going to try it too!
 
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Thanks Harriet, that was last year dates, I haven't changed them yet. I am still feeling like crap. Then my son's daycare said another parent had this for ten days. I can't be down for ten days.Thanks again for the feedback now to get this out. Do you guys think I should only email it, mail it or both. I am getting ready to send my newsletter, and don't know if it would be too much email in a week period.
 
Hi Amanda:

I am relatively new and just beginning to understand all the ways we use to encourage sales and bookings.

When I read both flyers, I was overwhelmed and confused. I would skinny it down to cover the basics of participation and reward. It should be no more than one page, IMO.

I agree with DH not to mention your travel goals. I would only mention that when recruiting.

Just my $.02 and good luck!
Susan
 

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What is "Ready to Send: Check My Wording & Generate $$$!"?

"Ready to Send: Check My Wording & Generate $$$!" is a resource designed for direct sales consultants, particularly those in the Pampered Chef community. It provides templates and wording suggestions for effective communication with potential customers, helping consultants to enhance their sales strategies and increase their earnings.

How can this resource help me improve my sales?

This resource offers proven messaging techniques and templates that can be customized for your audience. By using these suggestions, you can communicate more effectively, engage potential customers, and ultimately drive more sales for your Pampered Chef business.

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