What should I put on my discontinued product postcard?

[whiteyteresa]

I am getting a postcard ready to mail out about the discontinued products

I need help with what to put on the front side of the card - a list of the discontinued products are on the back on this card

I will be using either light yellow or lime green postcards (4 X 6) this way they will stand out in my customers mail.

Here is what I have already but not sure if it is okay - should I add something else, is the wording okay???

It just look sooooo unfinished

I will use a white address label on the card so that this will help stand out for the mail carrier.

HELP PLEASE - I want to put these in the mail tomorrow (Saturday) afternoon.

Thanks

:chef:

 

[kcjodih]

I'd recommend the PC logo so it stands out and then maybe an overflowing shopping cart (all the purchases they're going to make) or someone waving bye-bye as in going, going, gone...

I don't know, just a thought.

 

[smspamperedchef]

cute cute. although no suggestions here (sorry) post your finished product here so we can steal (borrow) it! LOL

 

[Intrepid_Chef]

I'd also make sure people know that these items are available on a FIRST COME, FIRST SERVED basis so they contact you right away ... there are somethings going that I fear will be gone FOREVER very soon!

 

[IAmChefJ]

I'd definitely ad a logo.

Great idea!
J.

 

[whiteyteresa]

I added a PC logo on my new copy - it is located right beside where the postage stamp is going

I tried to find a shopping cart and someone waving but in all of my clipart - I just can't find any

:chef: