Ready to Send: Check My Wording & Generate $$$!

[pamperedalf]

Okay I am getting ready to send this out to my customers, but want to check wording before I do. I made changes on 2 to include about my trip, my dh thinks it's too much!

I also included wording from the first one I did last year. It generated a $1300 show last feb. Thanks to whoever posted this the first time. TIA for all your help!

 

[Jules711]

If it's for February, it's 60% off any one item in the catalog. If you are able to "book" it off another show, you'd have a total of 4 to give. So...4 60% off, 4 1/2 off and I personally give 2 $100 free since $215 is a lot. I also give $25 for every extra $100 collected since it guarantees a payoff for doing more work. Also, why 25% vs 30%?? or do you not put it on the host order?

As for the rest, I'm not awake enough to give good feedback. Good luck! I really need to do this too! But I want to end it before double points! I have to get on the phone. No time to mail and follow up!

 

[JAE]

If it's for February, it's 60% off any one item in the catalog. If you are able to "book" it off another show, you'd have a total of 4 to give. So...4 60% off, 4 1/2 off and I personally give 2 $100 free since $215 is a lot. I also give $25 for every extra $100 collected since it guarantees a payoff for doing more work. Also, why 25% vs 30%?? or do you not put it on the host order?

As for the rest, I'm not awake enough to give good feedback. Good luck! I really need to do this too! But I want to end it before double points! I have to get on the phone. No time to mail and follow up!

2 items at 60% off. I know, you said you're tired.

 

[Jules711]

I was saying if you "booked" it off another show, you'd have 2 as host and 2 as past host.

 

[pamperedalf]

I hadn't change that wording yet, sorry I wasn't more specific. I meant the wording at the beginning. Thanks again!I have been sick the past two days so, all is fuzzy.

 

[pamperedharriet]

I like the concept Amanda! I am going to read it thoroughly and see if this is what I would do too.

 

[pamperedharriet]

Amanda, I just noticed that the day of the week is off a day from the date. Hope you haven't mailed them out yet. Other than that looks good to me!

 

[ChefMoore]

This is a great idea! I think I am going to try it too!

 

[pamperedalf]

Thanks Harriet, that was last year dates, I haven't changed them yet. I am still feeling like crap. Then my son's daycare said another parent had this for ten days. I can't be down for ten days.Thanks again for the feedback now to get this out. Do you guys think I should only email it, mail it or both. I am getting ready to send my newsletter, and don't know if it would be too much email in a week period.

 

[susanr613]

Hi Amanda:

I am relatively new and just beginning to understand all the ways we use to encourage sales and bookings.

When I read both flyers, I was overwhelmed and confused. I would skinny it down to cover the basics of participation and reward. It should be no more than one page, IMO.

I agree with DH not to mention your travel goals. I would only mention that when recruiting.

Just my $.02 and good luck!
Susan