Ice Cream Social Invite - What Do You Think?

[jcsmilez]

I'm going to do an Ice Cream Social at the end of June (hoping it will put me over the top of the $6,000 SAT level). Here's the flyer that I made - what do you think?I'm thinking that I will do a Kids in the Kitchen version on Sunday afternoon and then (eek!) a grown up version Monday night the 30th - Crazy I know, but I'm not sure where else I can fit it in. On the Adult version - I'm trying to give people the option of collecting $100 in orders to receive 30% off but I didn't want that to distract from the rest of the flyer (ie. I just want people to show up!). Ideas??Edit: the pic shows up a little different on here -- it prints borderless, 4 to a page, like a postcard. I put the address and map on the other side

 

[DessertDivaFL]

I would love to join you but I am on the opposite side of the US. The invitations are cute. The kids one is really super! The blue one could use less blue and more color. I would also cut down on the wording. It may not be necessary to list all the ice cream toppings. Just my thoughts. You have a great idea going!

 

[jcsmilez]

Yeah, I was worried about having too much wording but was also trying to figure out how to entice them to come.. I'll keep playing with it... Thanks