Help Needed: Second Show Closes 15th August

[PampMomof3]

hey guys. I thought that I would have a second show close before the 15th of August and now she's telling me that she needs an extra couple of days. (School just started and she's trying to get her kids off so she can collect some orders ). I thought that I would send an e-mail out to my customers letting them know that if they placed an order before the 14th (I know that only gives them a few days) but I would really like some feedback from you all. Tell me what you think, if I should add anything or that I left anything out or anything that I could re-word. I am wanting to send this out within a couple hours so I'm begging my fellow consultants if they would please help me out!!! Thank you so much in advance.

 

[proudmama02]

Looks great to me!! JUst make sure you don't eat all your profit. Unless your wanting to earn the mid-season products. Good Luck!!

 

[PampMomof3]

Thanks proudmama! That is exactly why I'm doing this promotion! I really strive hard to try and get anything PC is offering us even if it means doing a small promo like this!

 

[PampMomof3]

Okay I revamped it a little with help from my recruiter. Tell me what you think please!!!!

 

[BethCooks4U]

Okay I revamped it a little with help from my recruiter. Tell me what you think please!!!!

This looks great!! Are you mailing it or emailing it or both?

 

[gmosullivan]

That looks great.

 

[PampMomof3]

I am only e-mailing it since today is the 11th and it ends on the 14th. It wouldn't have time to get to peoples homes in time. Thanks everyone!