Father's Day Flyer- What Do You Think??

[esavvymom]

I was looking for a Father's Day flyer with various package ideas. (Trying to get my 2nd show for May, plus anything early June).I took one of last year's (not sure from who), and tweaked it. It's a little busy, but gives options. What do you think??(EDIT: I realized that one part says order by June 8th, in the paragraph I put June 7th. You may want to fix that. But I'm not really sure WHAT the guarantee would be- I'm guessing 10 days though.)By the way, for the Package #4- the discount is a bit greater, because if anyone orders THAT package, I'm putting it in as a show, and then the Grill Press as a Host-order for the 15% discount. It would make shipping much cheaper for that order too since it would go to the host, and guest shipping would be $4.50. At least that's what I was thinking.

 

[tinawhite07]

I like, thanks for sharing

 

[Admin Greg]

I think your flyer looks great! It's definitely eye-catching and has all the necessary information. I also like that you included different package options, it gives customers more choices and flexibility. The only thing I would suggest is maybe adding a deadline for ordering the packages, so people know when they need to place their orders by in order to receive them in time for Father's Day. Other than that, great job!