Sneak Preview F/W Products-Open House Flyer

[Jess_K]

Here is a flyer that I created for an open house at the end of August to showcase the new catalog and hopefully get some bookings. Please let me know any suggestions !!

Thanks!

 

[pamperedlinda]

You might want to remove the boxes from around the text, that will make it look 'less busy'.

 

[etteluap70PC]

I really like it.

LIke Linda said take out some of the text boxes.

And a little tip for a booking gift. MAke it something they get at their show! You do not want people saying they will book just to get something free then flake out on you. If you make it a product like a seas. best or a mini spat you can put it on their order and you get the discount off of it. and make comish back and can write the difference off on your taxes. Just enter it as a consultant gift on the payment screen.

HTH!

 

[Jess_K]

Updated Flyer FW Preview Open houseI changed it and updated it some.. maybe better?

thanks for the comments

 

[pamperedlinda]

This is what I would change:

1) get rid of all box lines - maybe just leave the one around your RSVP info

2) Take away the '!' after Invited (top line) - actually, you have too many exclamation points - only put them where you really want to emphasize. When you have too many they loose their importance.

3) Take away 'type of show' after the Come when you can..... statement Also change 'but, I will have..." to "and I will have..."

4) Try to realign the September Guest special area. The $10 is on a line all by itself. Maybe use a smaller font so it will all fit on one line.

5) Do you want them to RSVP by a certain date? If so be sure to put that in there.

How are you sending this out? Are you emailing or USPS mailing? You might want to add your phone number in case someone needs directions.

Hope that helps and hope I wasn't too critical.

Linda

 

[Trish1953]

Here's the Sneak Peek document I made.

Trish in Texas
Independent Consultant

 

[Jess_K]

thanksthanks for all the input.. I changed up the flyer again. thanks Linda.. you were helpful, but initially I must say that I decided not to post anything ever again lol... but then realized it was all to help.. and I appreciate it.

have a great day,
J

 

[pamperedlinda]

I didn't mean to hurt your feelings Jess, I apologize. Please continue to post your ideas, it gives everyone great ideas that they can either do themself or change-up what's been posted to suit their needs. I know I've received a ton of help since finding this site!

 

[etteluap70PC]

Jess... I totally know how you feel! The same thing happened to me the first few times I posted docs I had made myself. Truly the only reason I made any suggestion was because you asked. Usually I use things I find here and tweak them to my liking. We all have different tastes.

Keep up the good work!



No Linda it was not you! You have been nothing but helpful and fun!

 

[Jess_K]

I didn't mean to hurt your feelings Jess, I apologize. Please continue to post your ideas, it gives everyone great ideas that they can either do themself or change-up what's been posted to suit their needs. I know I've received a ton of help since finding this site!

no worries Linda

 

[DMB75]

Thanks Jess for the flier, I think I'll be using it.