Check Out My Updated Newsletter: What Do You Think?

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The forum discussion centers around feedback on an updated newsletter shared by a user. Contributors express positive sentiments about the newsletter's appearance while providing constructive criticism regarding factual inaccuracies and typographical errors. Key issues highlighted include the incorrect phrasing of a cancer statistic and the need for careful editing of borrowed content. Users emphasize the importance of customizing borrowed material to ensure accuracy and relevance.

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Here is my newsletter. I borrowed from past newsletters and updated a few things. What to you all think?
 

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Looks good to me. Thanks for sharing.
 
Looks Great! Thank you!
I usually love to do my own newsletters but the past few months I haven't had time.

Thanks again!
 
I loved it, Thanks so much.:) :)
 
Looks good! Thanks for sharing :)
 
very nice. thanks for sharing it with us.
 
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I am so glad you guys like. I am not really creative and I tend to "borrow" a lot from this site. Thank you to all that I borrowed from!!
 
You're first line is wrong. It should be "One in Eight women will develop cancer IN THEIR LIFETIME."

Go to http://www.breastcancer-research.org/breast_cancer_facts.html for some quick facts..BEE
 
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Thanks Bee,

I thought I copied it directly from Consultant News. I will change the info. That's why I like this site. I need all the editors I can get :) !
 
It looks good although some items (like the recipe) are cut off on the right side of the page.

Also a minor typo in the HWC products -- I think you meant cutE but wrote cut.
 
I think you might also want to check your spelling of "kool whip" which I think should be "cool whip". So here it is with all the changes mentioned by your freindly "editors".

As a reminder to anyone borrowing this newsletter, modify it, customize for your information, read all the various areas to make sure you've caught everyplace that needed changing (contact information, show dates, etc.)
 

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Thanks for the editorial revisions. So appreciated. I was wondering about "Kool" too. I copied the recipe from someone else's file so I didn't have to copy it from the recipe book. My spelling is terrible on good days. I rely on spell check too much!

Thank you so much!
 

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