Spanish-Speakers....please Proof Read, Please!!

[pamperedchef.carol]

I've attempted to create an English/Spanish door prize for a Hispanic bridal/quinceanera expo on Sunday. If you speak Spanish, would you PLEASE proof read it to make sure the translation make sense and are correct?? I'd hate to get there on Sunday and have some horrible mistake in the door prize slip.:yuck:

MANY thanks in advance!!!!

 

[PC_CPR]

Carol -- There's more than a few things wrong with it. I actually have a door prize slip that PC uses. I would use their terminology. Can you post your doc in Word? I'll send you corrections that way, if you'd like?For starters, it's Telefono (no "ph" )Let me know...

 

[PC_CPR]

Hi again,
I'm having trouble with "best time to reach you." What you have in Spanish is incorrect but I'm drawing a blank on what to suggest to you.Here are the other edits:QuinceañeraI’d like information on earning extra income
Deseo información sobre como ganar dinero adicional. I’d like to earn free Pampered Chef products.
Me gustaría ganar productos gratis de Pampered Chef.I’d like information about Pampered Chef’s Wedding Registry.
Deseo información sobre el registro de regalos de boda de Pampered Chef. Hablo español e ingles. (no capitalization of languages in Spanish)
No hablo ingles.

 

[Addie4TLC]

Hi again,
I'm having trouble with "best time to reach you." What you have in Spanish is incorrect but I'm drawing a blank on what to suggest to you.

Here are the other edits:

Quinceañera


I’d like information on earning extra income
Deseo información sobre como ganar dinero adicional.


I’d like to earn free Pampered Chef products.
Me gustaría ganar productos gratis de Pampered Chef.

I’d like information about Pampered Chef’s Wedding Registry.
Deseo información sobre el registro de regalos de boda de Pampered Chef.

Hablo español e ingles. (no capitalization of languages in Spanish)
No hablo ingles.

El mejor tiempo de llamarle or El mejor tiempo para comunicarme con ud. (??) Or "La hora mas apropiada para llamarle"?

 

[PC_CPR]

El mejor tiempo de llamarle or El mejor tiempo para comunicarme con ud. (??) Or "La hora mas apropiada para llamarle"?

Much better!

Thanks!

 

[Addie4TLC]

Much better!

Thanks!

I do mostly Spanish shows so I practice it quite a bit.

 

[pamperedchef.carol]

THANK YOU SO MUCH for all your replies and translations!! My high school Spanish from 15 years ago is pretty pathetic.

You ladies have saved me a ton of embarrassment, I'm sure!!

 

[PC_CPR]

You're welcome! Good luck!