I'm putting together a Power Cooking Workshop for May 30. I want to also promote the Help Whip Cancer items.

I had thought of saying:

Want to feel powerful?
Come to my Power Cooking Workshop and Help Whip Cancer!

Then have the Help WHip Cancer logo and a pink ribbon on the top left and right corners. Briefly hype up power cooking and then mention PC and the HWC campaign.

Do you think that would work?

Anyone creative out there have some other ideas I should use instead?

Or should I only focus on the Power Cooking so the invite isn't too overwhelming with information?

 

This is what I've come up with. Does it look okay? I just can't fit in the prices of the items or my extra contact info. Any suggestions to what I should cut out to fit it? Should I shorten the wording at the bottom?

Darn! I can't upload it for some reason!

 

Okay, here it is. Is it okay?

 

Really? No responses? Darn, I was hoping for some feedback.

Anyone have an opinion on this? Does it look okay? Is it too wordy for an invitation?