Separate names with a comma.
I took one of the newsletters from the US and revised it.
Good newsletter. I was wondering if you added photos to it? It would be nice to see pictures of the specials. Was your winning hostess picked at random or had the highest sales? Who do you send this newsleter to? e-mail or paper?
Sorry for the questions - I am thinking about doing a newsletter but I don't know it I have the time or customer base yet.
No I didn't add pics to it I just copied and pasted it in an email so it wouldn't be an attachment. You could add pics thou. The host was the one with top sales for the previous month. And I just email these for now as most of my customers have email.
Good job on your newsletter. I did however noticed some spelling mistakes. I wasn't going to mention it at first, but the more I thought of it, the more I thought, if it was ME, I'd want to know. So please don't be offended!
stripped (striped - Simple Additions)
nonshid (nonskid - microplaner)
minimixe (minimize - microplaner)
shos (shows - under chart of host benefits, in the details)
Again, this is well intentioned and good hearted and not meant to insult!
thanks for letting me know I sometime type to fast and then never read it over.
You're quite welcome! And I really hope you're not offended. I too, like I'm sure alot of us type as fast as we think and sometimes (most in my case) my fingers can't keep up!
Oh not at all thanks for letting me know. Of course I have sent it out with all the mistakes before. Oh well I'll have to post it on here first to have you guys proof read it.