Feedback on My April Newsletter

[jules]

Hello Everyone,
I would like some feedback on my April Newsletter. I just changed my format and I would like to know what other consultants think before I send it out.
Thanks,
Julie
PS. If you like the email and would like a copy for your own use, message me.

 

[tabnat80]

when I opened it up, the word herb keeper was just up there by itself on the right and Measure mix n pour was floating around the hwc stuff on the right. Other than that, it looks great to me.

 

[peichef]

looks good, though the yellow is hard to read. otherwise, it looks great

 

[PCMelissa]

Ok, this is probably just my crazy mind, but the ladle looked like a cigar pipe to me when I first openend it. It took me a while to figure out what it was. I wouldn't change it just cause of me, but I thought I would let you know.

 

[ccarp]

Ok, this is probably just my crazy mind, but the ladle looked like a cigar pipe to me when I first openend it. It took me a while to figure out what it was. I wouldn't change it just cause of me, but I thought I would let you know.

I like your newletter and format, but I have to agree with Melissa. In my mind it was a pipe first too.

 

[cathyskitchen]

You can't put "Discover the chef in you" on anything - it's a registered, trademarked "tagline" that PC owns. Other than that, it's fine. I just opt for the emails through Customer Connection on my website, though - they're professional and easy - I don't have to write anything!Also, don't apologize for something you haven't done - just say "look at my new newsletter!" and leave it at that. It looks sad and desperate, IMO (sorry, you asked for opinions!)

 

[pampered Ruth]

newsletter and newsletter questionsI agree that the ladle kind of looks like a pipe. Also, the comment about being sorry about not getting a newsletter out isn't necessary. One more thing ,(sorry) I think the price on the salad spinner is wrong. Last night I printed out the host special, and it is supposed to be $20 the colander set is $15.60 and the collapsilble bowl is $10. You might want to double check the prices. I think its great that you are doing a newsletter, I haven't gotten around to it yet. Give your self a big pat on the back!:thumbup:

 

[pampered Ruth]

newsletters and newsletter questionsSorry,one more thing... if you spend $60 you get the free items, not $80.

 

[cathyskitchen]

Sorry,one more thing... if you spend $60 you get the free items, not $80.

She's in Canada, so her prices and incentives are different.

 

[momoftwins]

Ok, this is probably just my crazy mind, but the ladle looked like a cigar pipe to me when I first openend it. It took me a while to figure out what it was. I wouldn't change it just cause of me, but I thought I would let you know.

I totally thought the same thing.